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College Raptor Data Clarification
This section explains the data points provided by College Raptor to help you evaluate your college fit. All data refers to the most recent year available.
Major-Specific Graduation Data
* Female Graduates: The number of female students who graduated with a degree in this major.
* Percentage of Female Graduates (of Major): The percentage of all graduates in this major who were female.
* percentage of Female Graduates (of All Females): The percentage of all female graduates who earned a degree in this major.
* Male Graduates: The number of male students who graduated with a degree in this major.
* percentage of Male Graduates (of Major): The percentage of all graduates in this major who were male.
* Percentage of Male Graduates (of All graduates): The percentage of all graduates who earned a degree in this major and were male. (Note: The original text incorrectly stated “females” here. It shoudl be “all graduates.”)
Academic Fit Score
* Academic Match Score (0-100): A score indicating how closely your academic profile (test scores, GPA, and intended major) matches the typical student at this institution. A higher score (up to 100) suggests a stronger academic alignment.This score is not a predictor of acceptance or overall happiness at the college.
Importent Considerations Regarding Acceptance
This Academic Match Score is based on a comparison of your academic credentials to those of students attending The Ohio State University at Columbus. We do not provide a specific probability of acceptance as admission decisions are holistic and consider many factors beyond academics, including:
* Extracurricular activities
* Interviews (if applicable)
* Application essays
* The college’s specific recruitment goals
Financial aid Details
* Estimated Loan Amounts: The loan amounts displayed are estimates. Your actual loan eligibility will vary based on your individual financial situation and the financial aid policies of the institution.
Acceptance Probability Categories
We categorize acceptance probability as follows:
* safety (90-100%): Very high likelihood of acceptance.
* Near Safety (70-90%): High likelihood of acceptance.
* Match (40-70%): Good chance of acceptance.
* Reach (15-40%): Lower chance of acceptance.
* Huge reach (Less than 15%): Very low chance of acceptance.
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Key Changes and Explanations:
* Corrected Error: Fixed the error in the last paragraph regarding “males graduating out of all females” to “males graduating out of all graduates.”
* Clarity and Institution: Grouped related data points together with clear headings.
* Removed Redundancy: Eliminated repetitive phrasing.
* Emphasis on Holistic Review: Strengthened the explanation that the Academic Match Score is not a guarantee of acceptance and that colleges consider a wide range of factors.
* Improved Language: Used more concise and professional language.
* Removed Date: Removed the date stamp as it was not relevant to the content.
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