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Ekam Dhaliwal, Sports Therapist and University Student, Pursues Physiotherapy Career
A young man named ekam Dhaliwal is combining his passion for sports therapy with a return to university studies, driven by a desire to help others. Dhaliwal recently supported BBC Coventry & Warwickshire (BBC CWR) during their Children in Need challenge in November 2023.
[Image of Ekam Dhaliwal with caption: Ekam Dhaliwal. He supported Radio CWR during their Children in Need challenge in November.]
Dhaliwal served as a sports therapist for BBC CWR’s 25-mile, three-legged Children in Need challenge, providing therapy and support to the participants. He expressed his enthusiasm for the cause, stating, “When it’s for Children in Need, it’s such a great cause… if I can help someone make an impact then that’s perfect.” (BBC Coventry & warwickshire, 2023).
Currently, Dhaliwal is back at university pursuing further education. He shared his motivation, saying, “I know it’s kind of a cliché, but wanting to help people is my ultimate motivation. I’ve been through such a time, I wanted to get back and help people.”
Looking ahead, Dhaliwal plans to pursue a master’s degree in physiotherapy, with a particular interest in neurological physiotherapy. He stated his ambition to specialize in this area, aiming to make a critically important contribution to the field.
Sources:
* BBC Coventry & Warwickshire.(2023, November 22). BBC CWR’s 25-mile, three-legged Children in Need challenge. Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/watch/?v=866548789374740
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